Hello ! I am working at a track... it sound's ok in my cheap crappy headphones (this are the best "monitors" I have atm), but I bet that on some decent sound system it doesn't. I really appreciate if somebody can offer me some feedback. Here are 2 samples from the track:

with percussion
A1 by Constantin Adomnicai

and with some synth and no percussion
A2 by Constantin Adomnicai

Sound good on my headphone. Good job. Keep it up.

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I think at this point you can trust what you hear, because this sounds fine.

this noobie is better than a lot of long time posters! those 28 seconds were a journey. haha.

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Originally posted by MSZ this noobie is better than a lot of long time posters! those 28 seconds were a journey. haha.

got that right

It was ok. You need to focus on actually creating grooves though. You have no really defined grooves in either track. Just very rigid up and down sidechaining type stuff. They are both very bouncy and lifeless imo. Make them more energized, swingy, unstable, groovy, etc etc. You're making it too easy to predict what will happen next and they both have an overquantized feel. Just trying to offer some construtive criticism.

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overall it has a nice feel and thats what matters!

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Thanks a lot for the feedback guys ! I will link the track as soon I finish it xD

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Originally posted by Constantin Thanks a lot for the feedback guys ! I will link the track as soon I finish it xD

yeah don't listen to robby rox, keeep up the good work

this is Actually decent, and sounds good on my speakers.

sounds good so far! reminds me of maor levi and that's a huge compliment from me - he's one of my favs.

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sounds good here, nice job

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