here's a track Ive been working on, need some feedback and advice
thanks

Zodionic - Reality check by Zodionic

Ok, how to say this: you've got the template sort of worked out, the sounds are there, the tricks and fx are there, mix is not too bad either. But there is really NOTHING in there that grabs me and gives this track any identity. I guess you just layed down the perfect filler track. so work on a killer riff and make it happen, the foundation is good.

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