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Artist: Sacred Cycles
Name: Ocean Breeze (Original Mix)
Genre: Trance
Equipment: FL Studio X; Sylenth; Nexus; Gladiator; Vengence Samples
Length: 3:35
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Hello, my first Trance tune (also first attempt @ some video editing), work in progress,
I believe the track is almost done.
Is it any good ?
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Oct-08-2011 09:14
justin
bana na-na
Registered: Jan 2001
Location: home
ery inspiring
Oct-08-2011 10:25
sacred.cycles
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Oct 2011
Location: Durban
quote:
Originally posted by justin
ery inspiring
thx, still need a few more years exp, but I will get there!
Oct-08-2011 18:06
mnw479
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Berkeley, CA
good mixing and automation, but the bass could be more varied
Oct-08-2011 19:31
sacred.cycles
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Oct 2011
Location: Durban
quote:
Originally posted by mnw479
good mixing and automation, but the bass could be more varied
Thank you,
The bassline is built with 2x sylenths, and does have some automation on the cutoff filter, do you mean the actual arrangement/notes or the sound ?
Oct-08-2011 20:05
mnw479
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Berkeley, CA
kind of both, harmonic variety would help but i think the bassline is thin and there's not enough movement. At the beginning it sits there
Oct-08-2011 20:08
sacred.cycles
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Oct 2011
Location: Durban
quote:
Originally posted by mnw479
kind of both, harmonic variety would help but i think the bassline is thin and there's not enough movement. At the beginning it sits there
great feedback, thx, will fix that up during the final mixdown.
Oct-08-2011 20:41
mnw479
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Berkeley, CA
no problem, if you need anymore feedback just send me a PM
Oct-08-2011 20:42
sacred.cycles
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Oct 2011
Location: Durban
quote:
Originally posted by mnw479
no problem, if you need anymore feedback just send me a PM
