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Hey man,
Great track to remake, looking forward to this!
Typing as I listen,
Nice percussion in the intro, things are taking a while to build up though, the intro is starting to drag on a bit. Kick is quite far back in the mix and the bass clashes quite badly with it and is quite boomy, what are you mixing on? I can't make out the lows of the kick at all and it doesn't have any power. The low end of the track needs to be cleaned up quite a lot.
Great build up with that pitch continually rising, but again it still feels as if it drags on a bit. After that sort of a bit up I would have expected a massive drop but instead it goes into the breakdown, it was such an epic build up. Maybe have another think about the arrangement of the track.
I like the melody change man nice idea and good work there!
Overall you have some great ideas but I think the mix could be worked on especially the lows of the track and also the arrangement needs some work. Hope that helps out
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