The drums don't groove, and in the loop they seem to fall out of place timing wise in parts. The bassline kind of wiggles around strangely in certain parts, too. Melo is decent. Mixdown is kind of iffy though.

The bit from about 2 minutes, for a while there has a satisfying uplifting feel I really like, but somehow this is not complimented either side of this portion.

In this good part it sounds all round whole and emmotional. The bassline is slightly too lumpy / loud there though and that hi pitched fx noise is too loud.

There's a decent track in the section I like.

The drop is not working mate, it somehow looses everything that the early portion (the bit I like) had.

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