Hi,

I want you to listen to a sample. Do you think it's good enough to make a full song with this melody or what I should change.

Download sample here

Thanx in advance,

Kilano

I don't know, it sounds all over the place. The instrument used sounded good but the pattern could do with a bit of a lift. Also, i don't know if it was like this cos its just a sample, but it could do with some structuring. The changes seems to happen randomly rather than in 32 beat patterns

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