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| quote: | Originally posted by EddieZilker
Better. Love the variation, actually.
Still, far too much repetition and the melody is a bit trite. |
Which melody?
Here is a second take for you eddy, let me know if this one is an improvement for you. I've added something closer to the end for you.
http://kiwi6.com/file/md14cmu00i
Last edited by *** on Feb-23-2012 at 08:47
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