I think u need more synths and strings. The best part of the song is from 2nd minute to the 3rd. where u have many sounds together and the song has great flow. the rest of the song lacks depth.

but the melody and the idea of the song, together with the EQ quality is great, just need some more sounds imo

Last edited by antonsenlarsen on Mar-05-2012 at 18:25

thanks mate, to be honest i wrote this in 4 hours while laying in bed, using skullcandy ear bud headphones as i sold my studio monitors in order to raise the money for a better pair. i am thinking adams or dynaudio.

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