Hello, this is my remix submission for "Too The Moon And Back" by Dimo Van Kos. Let me know what you think if you give it a listen

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Last edited by Jemuel Pavlic on Mar-13-2012 at 18:04

It's ear splitting. If your'e going for this wall of sound type mix, it takes a lot of skill. Some sounds and the overall nmix are very shrill to listen to on pc speakers. EQ alone wont fix it. You need more refined sounds and reverbs.

The kick is very old sounding wooden knock and distorts badly on pc speakers.

I like the fact you've been ambitious, but take a listen at high volume on pc speakers, and A/B it to a similar pro track.

If it were me I'd pull all the faders down, and then rebuild the whoile thing - keep referencing on small pc speakers.

I like that lead sounds and the massive pads (but still they sound ear splitting- maybe too much resonance or something).

Good luck and sorry for the negative comments.

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Volume automation is your friend here :]

I agree with Richard, its soo loud.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler It's ear splitting. If your'e going for this wall of sound type mix, it takes a lot of skill. Some sounds and the overall nmix are very shrill to listen to on pc speakers. EQ alone wont fix it. You need more refined sounds and reverbs. The kick is very old sounding wooden knock and distorts badly on pc speakers. I like the fact you've been ambitious, but take a listen at high volume on pc speakers, and A/B it to a similar pro track. If it were me I'd pull all the faders down, and then rebuild the whoile thing - keep referencing on small pc speakers. I like that lead sounds and the massive pads (but still they sound ear splitting- maybe too much resonance or something). Good luck and sorry for the negative comments.

Don't apologize for the negative comments, that's what I need, or else I wouldn't have posted here I'll get back to work on it and see what i can do. Thanks.

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Updated it, fixed the loudness and low end.

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