Looking for some tuned trance/ progressive ears to give me feedback on these two tunes I've made

My first trance/ progressive songs so far. Must say I really enjoyed making these. I promise they're not complete horse shit!!

http://soundcloud.com/crotocol/motion-re-edit-one

http://soundcloud.com/crotocol/so-you-say-test-1

horse shit.

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Originally posted by Looney4Clooney horse shit.

lol

Don't have the time to pick apart the pile of poo?

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

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Originally posted by Beatflux lol Don't have the time to pick apart the pile of poo?

Yes please, what makes it horse shit, what could I do to rid it of horse shit? Everything other than singular comments would be nice.

didn't listen. That would imply this is the promotion forum and it would not compute and i would blow a capacitor. Actually, i'm running vintage tubes. Thought process is slow but warm.

cow dung
donkey feeces
monkey turd

all those apply

I would use a picture that isn't so punchable. Like if we were at a party together, i would spread rumours the first few hours about a motley gang of flies, And then at about 12, i would just clock you in the junk and yell i got them. You get punched, i got rid of the flies and i am the hero for the night. You can't get an erection, i go home with a black chick and a brazilian check and a blonde chearleader. Neapolitan style

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"This is why Superman works alone." GC
old stuff from days gone by (2001-2004)
Mad For Brad's gay little contest

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Originally posted by Looney4Clooney didn't listen. That would imply this is the promotion forum and it would not compute and i would blow a capacitor. Actually, i'm running vintage tubes. Thought process is slow but warm. cow dung donkey feeces monkey turd all those apply

Lol fair enough, where should I post something I'd like feedback on? I literally just signed up for this.

exactly

you are taking on your first post. That is spam. I am too famous to deal with that shit.

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Post it at http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74

And, the general unwritten rule is that the more feedback you give, the more you get.

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Originally posted by cryophonik Post it at http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74 And, the general unwritten rule is that the more feedback you give, the more you get.

cryophonik I'll be sure to check your cloud in a few currently in class.

what is with you facebook bean counters and checking out other people's clouds not withstanding they don't check yours out. Props should be assigned by merit, not by whether they gave you some. This is getting as bad as the old mp3.com model. It is artificial buzz. Having followers that only follow you because you follow them is of no value.

and your name, i mean granted Protocol is too obvious but like you can't just replace it with a C and make it alright. A hiphop P would be less lame.

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"This is why Superman works alone." GC
old stuff from days gone by (2001-2004)
Mad For Brad's gay little contest

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Originally posted by Looney4Clooney what is with you facebook bean counters and checking out other people's clouds not withstanding they don't check yours out. Props should be assigned by merit, not by whether they gave you some. This is getting as bad as the old mp3.com model. It is artificial buzz. Having followers that only follow you because you follow them is of no value.

I agree with you 100%. I'm not looking for followers however, I'm looking for, as mentioned; FEEDBACK, CRITICISM, POINTERS. Having a followers serves nothing at face value opposed to fans.

i've given you all those.

And no, you using the veil of feedback as a way to get people to somehow care you exist. So fuck off. Using your first post to take is not polite. Contribute something, and maybe people will give a fuck, I have more respect for a bot because they make silly grammar mistakes i find cute. And the word bot is funny in its own right, But human spamming is pathetic.

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"This is why Superman works alone." GC
old stuff from days gone by (2001-2004)
Mad For Brad's gay little contest