I like the overall sound, and think it could be an interesting track.

The hats and percussion is sounding a little weird to me, you got some sort of distortion on them?

Clap is nice, but try add some bite, either compression or layering. Clap + snare at the moment?

At 2.30 I'm getting bored. Sounding the same, maybe start filtering the pads away and bring something new in?

Plucks at the 4 min mark are nice, but this track isnt going anywhere.

Maybe add some impacts, like a Kick with the lows boosted + reverb with highs cut off and nice long tail.

Goodluck

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Originally posted by Julz I like the overall sound, and think it could be an interesting track. The hats and percussion is sounding a little weird to me, you got some sort of distortion on them? Clap is nice, but try add some bite, either compression or layering. Clap + snare at the moment? At 2.30 I'm getting bored. Sounding the same, maybe start filtering the pads away and bring something new in? Plucks at the 4 min mark are nice, but this track isnt going anywhere. Maybe add some impacts, like a Kick with the lows boosted + reverb with highs cut off and nice long tail. Goodluck

Thanks! the hats and precussions have some bit reduction i think. its just one snare i thought maybe its has a bit too much snap already but i could try adding some more then .

And yea its very very basic i just threw this together in like 5 hours to repel boredom, will add more stuff for sure and thanks for the advice, you helped me a lot with my last track as well you really know your stuff

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