Here's the link, if anyone could give me some feedback of what i have so far it would be greatly appreciated

Targus28 nicely done mate,,,,,mix is clean, cool filter sweeps

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sounding good -

nice production, good bass.

The arp that comes in at the start is a little random, it appears to repeat every 1.1 bars, which is a little distracting.

think the breakdown is a little dischordant - the last note in your sequence suddenly makes the major progression minor (until the bass comes in)

think you could lose the bit from 3:45 (where the bassline repeats) and just kick it back in - but that's the hard bit, delivering after the breakdown!

good WIP though

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Originally posted by Peter Campbell Targus28 nicely done mate,,,,,mix is clean, cool filter sweeps

Thank you

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Originally posted by optik sounding good - nice production, good bass. The arp that comes in at the start is a little random, it appears to repeat every 1.1 bars, which is a little distracting. think the breakdown is a little dischordant - the last note in your sequence suddenly makes the major progression minor (until the bass comes in) think you could lose the bit from 3:45 (where the bassline repeats) and just kick it back in - but that's the hard bit, delivering after the breakdown! good WIP though

Thanks mate, i try hard to get a good kick and bass drives the track.

Yeh i need to work on fitting that arp in better, maybe lowering it or EQ'ing it a bit

Ive only worked on the start and breakdown, I'm going to be making the drop and the outro very soon