alright well. keep in mind this is only my opinion, the feedback you asked for. I'd drop everything past the 1:00 mark and stick with that. You have some talent when it comes to percussion and the track that I was expecting and what I got after the 1:00 mark was night and day. You went from a tribal kind of techno sound to tech house anthemy type track and that didn't work for me. So, here's my advice. Stick with the tribal / techno sound. I think that suits you. Buld upon that.

Thanks DJRYAN! I appreciate your opinion. That change in sound after 1:00 makes 2:45 hit harder IMO and I'm willing to keep it. I might change the melody/sounds though because I'm not entirely happy with that. Cheers!

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I think the lead sounds are too soft. A few other mixing issues. The bass work sounds really good to me though.

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