also, i know that the EQ'ing is horrible, I actually did virtually none, its just a rough demo, not the real deal...

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hello from Australia,
nice work on getting this down in one night, at the end I was waiting for that drop man.. up that bassline mate, make it move us

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I like the lead, its a good idea

Work on EQ, dynamics and overall production and you could have something really nice

Thanks for the replies so far guys, appreciate it

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Don't like the chord progression, you might take a second look at that. Also the drop is too sudden, all I hear is everything through a LP filter and a very thin sweep with resonance. Instead of ramming everything through the filter use the parameters of the synths to build it up.

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Originally posted by Deillon Don't like the chord progression, you might take a second look at that. Also the drop is too sudden, all I hear is everything through a LP filter and a very thin sweep with resonance. Instead of ramming everything through the filter use the parameters of the synths to build it up.

Thanks for this. But i dont think many people understand when i say that this is just a rough idea of the drop, not the build up. Anyway, thanks once again, and if this is made into an actual song, obviously the build up will be different.

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I think the lead is too loud and a bit too obvious. Interesting idea.

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I get you that it's bare bones, so in that vein I wanted to say I dig the main melodic progression. If you can now build a proper track from this with good sounds, stutters and so on, it could be great. Don't you just love getting the main idea down, the fun part, but then we have to face the slog of transforming it into a finished article!

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