That's pretty cool. Mixdown seems good.

sounding good so far. Im interested in hearing them vocals, be sure to post an update for us later man

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Kind of indie dance! Some of the parts of the bass sound a little discordant though and uncomfortable.

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Add some distortion, and a beefier clap, something with more noise and a longer tail...Also, not a fan of that drum roll at the front but that might just be me. Keep it up, it has potential!

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The snare is weird. Definitely needs to be replaced. Some distortion on the track too. Will work on the discordant bass.


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Sorry man, SC is freaking down again - will check later.

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Yeah, hope it isn't down long. I made a lot of changes to the song
I want to get up.

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You can safely work on it man, I can hear some cool melodic idea in it but you (just because sound 80's-90's) you will have to use some cleaver transition, FX or ever inject this modulated/morphing bass live in order to add 2012 face to it - nice idea, good start and sweet melody = prescription for goo track

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Thanks, my new version hasn't been put up yet because I am stuck at school for a few more hours and it is a little more modern (and longer)

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Damned good mix on this. I like the vibe so far. Can't wait to here dose vocal licks!

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I didn't automate anything and there aren't much effects and stuff but it is longer now.

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