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Will try later as looks like SC is down for maintenance lol

See you later.

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Last edited by TranceLover007 on Apr-25-2012 at 18:51

I like what I'm hearing but for some reason (with this type of music/genre) I don't feel this dynamics and energy in it yet and have now idea why not. There is something missing in this track something which will create/add some nice riff to it and with out it you will really struggle to get some interest from different producers/people.

I thing this concept is really cool but you will need to find the way to get this dynamics up to next level - will try to listen a bit more later and see if I can point you to a specific place to get this issue correct/adjust.

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I like it so far, but would love to hear what happens next, as most likely I'll be mixing over this bit!

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 I like what I'm hearing but for some reason (with this type of music/genre) I don't feel this dynamics and energy in it yet and have now idea why not. There is something missing in this track something which will create/add some nice riff to it and with out it you will really struggle to get some interest from different producers/people. I thing this concept is really cool but you will need to find the way to get this dynamics up to next level - will try to listen a bit more later and see if I can point you to a specific place to get this issue correct/adjust. Cheers man, Darek

I know what you mean, i think some things are missing in the Freq range maybe.

Ive added some more percussion, a acid line, and a extra melody layer.Let me know your thoughts . BTW, the drop is just a rough sketch right now.

So good step in the right direction man.

Try to use a lot more FX (for my taste) will help you create this silky atmo around your base melody.

As far as this dynamics I was previously talking about, I think I know where this problem resides - try to add another layer of a bass line with slightly different characteristic (like mid low end) and very pattern on it, not like your regular bass line when you hitting 1/16 note - if you know what I mean - this should give you a nice energy and emphasize this riff (which this track needs).

All the best man,

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Hi There - just my 2c worth. I like the production and tightness. Sounds are good to me as well. I just think you need to work on a defining element(s) to take the listener somewhere different. Something that defines the track more as your style. Hope that's not too vague!..

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Man, this turned out really fking great! I love the energetic feel of this one. Honestly, I can see it being released.

One thing though, is there some clipping at 1:35 (FX maybe?) or is it just me/SC?

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