Some well executed ideas in here. Drums are nice although could do with comming through a little more clearly / loudly compared to synths.

I might suggest having the main drop part having no synths at some points, to vary things up a bit??

Also maybe add some nice perc rolls and small variations here n there.

Good work so far.

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Something I saw looney4clooney talking about is not having too clean a mix. Then I was listening to an Arty remix the other day and the thing had the most white noise and such I have ever heard just like he said. During the climax I could barely hear the drums, so that is why you can't really hear them. As for perc rolls, I will add those flourishes soon. Thanks for the feedback!

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Pretty cool, drums don't seem to come through very much though.

yeah, I am letting this one go. Spent a lot of time on it after I posted this, but learned from it anyway.

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That's my train of thought, plus if I need any of the elements or feel like saving it, project files aren't that big. I've got thousands. I tend to learn something or gain some kind of experience each time I work on something.

That is how I am trying to look at it. I realized that it isn't this song, or any of my previous songs that needs to get better, it is ME that needs to get better. I only have 100 or so project files

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I'd definitely like to hear this when it's finished. A little shrill and I'm not sure about the lengthy intro but a lot of it sounds pretty, so far.

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