For peace, id cut out that higher tone in the kick, sounds like a tennis ball hitting the floor over and over. maybe boost low end and make it thump.

Composition is awesome!

The mix sounds a bit forced, on all the stringing arp's and stabs, there is a bit to much reverb, which brings up noise and lowers volume of the original sound which results in mud. I'd filter the delays, giving some of the arps delays higher freqs, and some mids to balance it out. Easy on the verb! dont over compress every little thing.

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There seems to be a lot of hi's in the bassline and no sub. Also, the bassline seems very stereo and kind of travels from l to r which sounded a bit strange. Interesting and complex melodies on both.

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some awesome melodies in the second one, you really have to do something about that sparkly bass pad though, new one for sure. great stuff though, pm me if you ever release it with a boss bass, ill buy it.