You need to improve your transitions, as they are too sudden at the moment. I don't like the chord progression at all.

Can't say much about EQ, besides that to me your kick sounds muffled and the low end sounds weird.

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Originally posted by Deillon You need to improve your transitions, as they are too sudden at the moment. I don't like the chord progression at all. Can't say much about EQ, besides that to me your kick sounds muffled and the low end sounds weird.

Which low end? If you mean the bass, its kick topped on bass to give it that extra "umph". In which I'm assuming you're referring to the melody? Yeah I'll work on the progression for sure call it sort of a rough sketch , I'll take out that other part in the beginning since the synths don't match well. wanted to get the EQ perfected a'fore I got right down to the main progressive stages.

Really appreciate the feedback.

Re-eq'd it. Ill put in some chord progression afore I re-upload again

Last edited by Ficticious on Aug-22-2012 at 09:44

Shorter, less crazy. still deciding on synth's, working with them. Any ideas would be good. Slowly shaping it into a less muddy type of song. Feel I'm lacking energy in a synth somewhere along the way..

Criticism and times would be nice, and your own input of ideas is always a possibility

Still trying to figure out my Eq's a little.

Finally embedd'd that

Last edited by Ficticious on Aug-27-2012 at 09:39