Any feedback welcome before I maybe send this one out.

Is break lacking some excitement, like maybe a big downwards falling melody line made of a thousand saws or something? Maybe a long crash on last drop too?

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Richard, I use to believe that minimal-Techno/Electro was your personal favorite style my friend but I guess I was wrong lol - you definitely feel really comfortable in (Ibiza type) genre and I really like it.

One thing man, don't get this personal -> this kick is not doing this track a justice, draw too much of my attention and feel really dry to me but remember this is my personal take on it. The rest is just massive success at this point -> well done brother !!!!

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Darek

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Cheers

I realise with fresh ears that the plucky synths jutt out too much in places and that nthey still need layering in places to make them more exciting.

Anyway the track is sounding very boring to me now though.

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I think the melodies are very nice but the percussion sounds weak to me the snare in particular could be much more powerful to induce more drive. I like the build at about 3:25-3:30.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Cheers I realise with fresh ears that the plucky synths jutt out too much in places and that nthey still need layering in places to make them more exciting.

I don't thinks so, this is really what make this track attractive, this clean sound + melody line of it.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Anyway the track is sounding very boring to me now though.

Again, I don't think so, you catch my attention and that really good sign, I'm picky to some extend about what I like and dislike - I would definitely spend some more time on this track and polish it a bit more for some shopping in the future - my $0.02 Richard.

Cheers man,

Darek

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As always you weave together so many different elements, sounds, parts. I kind of get a Pryda vibe with your tracks.

BTW, I hope you finish the last two tracks you posted because I really liked them.

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The only thing i would say is that the kick seems to not sit with everything else. Great groove and melodic as well. The name , well perhaps it is personal, but that is something i would consider changing ? I mean perhaps an acronym so that it is still dear to you but not a turnoff for the djs shopping on BP.

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Your stuff is usually much darker than this. Taking that into consideration, this departure into uplifting sunset territory is decidedly cool. Once again, all I can say is that I'm looking forward to the finished product. I can't really offer any feedback with finishing touches simply because it already sounds fairly well developed. Kudos!

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Watched this one a long time I have...

It's not over complicated or pretentious, and I think the title of the track is needed to convey what is intended with the track.

It's not a dance floor destroyer, but doesn't sell itself as such either.

Perhaps a bit more beef in the kick, but that's the sort of comment I would make about anything so take it at face value. You wouldn't want something that over states itself either as it would sound too out of place and would go against the general vibe of the track.

Not sure the lables will get or go for this, but it's a nice well constructed piece.

Cheers
Karl

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Really into this. Could you give me an email address I could contact you at?