I really do not want to sound mean here and i am not the best at giving advice on this kind of electro stuff but this was rather unpleasant to listen to. The perc hit is ear piercing. The synth that comes in feels off and it was hard to find the grove outside the bass which was ok.

I have been told my stuff does not have enough grit so you dont want to listen to me though haha

Hola!

Gave this a listen.
I would say that the hat is a little piercing, but might just want to bring it down a bit in the mix rather than tame any freqs.

This has a nice groove to it and it actually works for me.

Thanks for sharing
Nem

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Thank you two for taking your time listening, hats & the perc may be a bit ear piercing i am going to decrease the volume a bit, the synth is probably a matter of taste i like this psychedelic sounds a lot but i am aware they are a bit old fashioned :P

Honestly i think it sounds pretty good except for the highs need some toning down, they're just overpowering the track and taking away from the other elements... so yea other then that sounds great!