Nice track.

The one thing that stops this from really standing out though is that whilst it is really well done in terms of production values, the melody/hook does not cement itself naturally in my mind suggesting that it's not strong enough in its own right.

I always try and see things in terms of if a punter was to come up and try and hum a tune to me (which happens) how they would get to grips with this one. In other words, it needs a stronger identity to stop it from melting in to the mass of other tracks that sound like it.

Thanks for sharing though and was worth the listen

Cheers
Karl

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 Nice track. The one thing that stops this from really standing out though is that whilst it is really well done in terms of production values, the melody/hook does not cement itself naturally in my mind suggesting that it's not strong enough in its own right. I always try and see things in terms of if a punter was to come up and try and hum a tune to me (which happens) how they would get to grips with this one. In other words, it needs a stronger identity to stop it from melting in to the mass of other tracks that sound like it. Thanks for sharing though and was worth the listen Cheers Karl

Karl, thanks for the great constructive criticism. I will keep working on it

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Originally posted by atrophIA Could you give me an email address I could contact you at?

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You have got all the elements there and a very good and strong melody. Keep up the hard work dude.

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