I spend a lot of hours on creating thisone. I would really like some feedback! Does anyone have some suggestions or tips?

Thanks!

The mix sounds pretty clean and crisp. The percs shimmer well and the synths sit in the mix well. But there's just something missing, and I think its mostly a lack of layering of percussion and fx sweeps etc to keep the ear traveling with the beat. Plus you arent automating too much in the synth sounds themselves. I would try to create a 16 bar automation circuit that completely evolves the synth leads over in a cyclical pattern (a cyclical pattern stretching the full 16bars so as to keep the listener interested).

Thanks a lot for your reply. I do understand what you mean. Percussion isnt my forte yet. I will definitely work on that in my next production.

There is some automation on all the leads, but I always feel that too much automation messes up the volume levels.
Anyway, thanks. I will take your tips into consideration for my next track!

good stuff, percussion is not yet there, but melodies are really nice.

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