well the kick is nice and punchy. the high hats have a nice vintage sound to them that I like. That pad-loop piano thing you got going is a little muddy in the +350hz-4khz region I think but thats just me. Its kinda drowning out the mix - and thats where I think you could be expanding, cuz I could def see more of a piano chord progression/melody coming in to offset the 60s vibe. a simple whitenoise sweep -subtle but present - would really emphasize changes in the track too - and a subfreq osc pitch automated builder along with the sweep would sound ill i think. Some type of comb filtered/unison/flangey square pluck sound could work for a melody as well - or the oldschool m1 organ sound from robyn s show me love, which I actually used in one of my recent demos.
Cool track though - I wouldj ust keep layering.
Nov-03-2012 10:05
Vancouver
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2007
Location: Vancouver, canada
not bad. For my taste the bassline is a bit off.
Nov-03-2012 21:56
Whip_lash
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Sauga, Ontario
Thanks for the comments guys! i was thinking about adding more sweeps but i didnt want to go overboard as there is alot in the buildups.
Not sure about the bassline, i don't hear it being off.. nor have i heard from anyone else that its off, i adjusted it a bunch of times so maybe it is but i dont hear it!
