heey all!

pls take a listen to this.. and tell me what u think and give some comments
im still working on the strings at the end of the song and main melo..this is only the intro part

v1.
download here

v2.
download here

(both needs to be equalized)

peace

john

Last edited by John on Sep-15-2002 at 13:23

Heeeeeeeeeeej John! (toch maar een reply'tje van me
Ik vind het een heel mooi nummer..
en wacht nog steeds op een speciaal liedje dat je voor mij maakt :P

xxxxxx Lindsey

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Originally posted by Lindsey Heeeeeeeeeeej John! (toch maar een reply'tje van me Ik vind het een heel mooi nummer.. en wacht nog steeds op een speciaal liedje dat je voor mij maakt :P xxxxxx Lindsey

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heeee thnx
en ik moet eerst goed muziek kunnen maken..dan maak ik wel een liedje voor je maar nu klinkt et crap:S
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anyone else in for some feedback??

heee john jongen!!

i'll download and see if i like!

ps. heb jij toevallig nog die grid tool voor photoshop?...

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Pretty good John, pretty good!

Just a question , why do u can it Dub mix? I couldn´t hear any vocals at all... :/

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Originally posted by robstar Pretty good John, pretty good! Just a question , why do u can it Dub mix? I couldn´t hear any vocals at all... :/

det är poängen, om det är en Dub mix finns inga Vocaler.

now to the song:
ik hou van da strings

i have to say i didn't expect much but i'm quite impressed!!! it has a good build-up and everything fades in and out very nicely!! lets hope the qlimax is quite was good as the build-up and you'd have very nice track indeed!!

welke software heb je gebruikt??...

edit* i may have a suggestion.. the part before the "classical part" i might wanna aid an extra layer if you know what i mean.. the melody there is catchy but try not to make it too .... (overdreven??)

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Originally posted by Endre det är poängen, om det är en Dub mix finns inga Vocaler. now to the song: ik hou van da strings

i guess the first thing means something like: because a dub remix doesnt have vocals? :P (well thats what a though at least else ill name it instrumental or something when its finished..)

and thanks for liking the strings (which arent even finished yet) and for talking dutch

to TimeportE,
ik zal et wat afzwakken daaro (ik denk dat ik snap wat je bedoel)
heb et trouwens met reason2.0 met bijna alleen de standaard refills.. op een paar samples na..die komen van analoguesamples.com
ohw en ik heb die grid plugin nog voor je

http://kem.hapklaar.com/gi0vann1/Photoshop_Grid.zip

thanks for replying all!


edit:
im thinking of asking a friend of mine whos in a band to sing in something for me, she told me once she would like to do it, so...
the only thing is..i dont know how to record vocals properly...is probably inpossible with just a pc a mic and soundforge? (or any other recording software)

Hehe.....well I was just checking...

Cuz when it´s called Dub it should really have vocals in it.....just small hints of it...with long delays on...
But aparantly (sp) not in the trance genre...

I`m not trying to be a smartass...it´s just that I think this Dub bussines is pretty funny
Look at reggae music...and check out the Dub genre and u´ll understand what I mean


Again...like this tune dude! I love the original and I have always wanted to hear a trance rmx of it

LateR|Z!!

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Originally posted by robstar Hehe.....well I was just checking... Cuz when it´s called Dub it should really have vocals in it.....just small hints of it...with long delays on... But aparantly (sp) not in the trance genre... I`m not trying to be a smartass...it´s just that I think this Dub bussines is pretty funny Look at reggae music...and check out the Dub genre and u´ll understand what I mean Again...like this tune dude! I love the original and I have always wanted to hear a trance rmx of it LateR|Z!!

thanks!

and ill check out some reggae dub. the reason is i named it dub remix is because i read something here on the forums a dub remix
but it doesnt really matter ill just rename it when its finished

ohw and my friend said she'd love to sing for my tracks.. but dont expect something like jan johnston or sarah maclachan or something with her bands she makes rock
now the problem is how to record those vocals without a proffessional studio...
hope there's someone who can help me out on this?

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xal ut maar int engels zegge

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ok... my little review:

-the kick.. its a bit 2 bassy..
-i like that little ffect.. i think its an square waveform.. could use some fx tho..
-bassline is pretty cool
-the main synth.. well.. the basics are okay.. but it needs a bit more power
-strings are nice
-the layers are pretty cool done.. did u all figure them out urself??

well nice track.. but uhh.. i think it isn`t uploaded right.. cuz it just stops @ 5:07

grtz,

DJ Mantis

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Originally posted by mantisnl [dutch] xal ut maar int engels zegge [/dutch] ok... my little review: -the kick.. its a bit 2 bassy.. -i like that little ffect.. i think its an square waveform.. could use some fx tho.. -bassline is pretty cool -the main synth.. well.. the basics are okay.. but it needs a bit more power -strings are nice -the layers are pretty cool done.. did u all figure them out urself?? well nice track.. but uhh.. i think it isn`t uploaded right.. cuz it just stops @ 5:07 grtz, DJ Mantis

thanks! this is very helpfull ive spent the most of this day trying to improve things, but it doesnt really work out when you play the file in winamp the winamp eq shows that there are so many frequencies missing or just not loud enough..

do you know how i can give that synth more power?

about the layers..what exactly do you mean by layers?..i used a .midi to recreate the melodies..i wish i could have done it by ear, but that goes beyond my musical skills (which arent much unfortunately)
and well..anything else in this song ive done myself

and the time correct..it isnt finished yet, im trying to find something that fits nicely after the strings.. maybe someone have some suggestions?

last thing: how it sounds now

Last edited by John on Sep-15-2002 at 17:05