Cool track. The strings are VERY nice I think. I'd try to make a deeper bass sound.. maybe putting one of the oscillators one octave down or something? I dunno..
Just took a couple of listens to your new track, and I think it's pretty damn good. I always say that a perfect trancer tune has nice energy, then slows right down into a melodic section, then builds back up.
I agree with the poster above that a slightly deeper/bassier emphasis would be an improvement, but that's really about the only thing that I can say that is negative.
I think I'm going to throw this song into the next digital mix I do (Mix 12), and I can always tweak the bass up a bit.