hi!

This has great potential. Theres a few steps that would make this song much better though. I would like to hear a louder lead in the takeoff part of the song. from 0:55. Your plucked sound which you are using as a lead is kinda drowning in background pads if you know what I mean. Maybe you could just lower the volume of the pads in the back. im not sure. but it lacks something where its supposed to explode into greatness

keep working on it, im sure it'll become rly good. I like the melody and the build-up and everything.

Feedback on my song would be appreciated btw
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...s=#.UL5UdYOPNOk

im working right now on ur feedback after that i will post teh result :P and will check out ur track , tnx for the feedback the new inproved one will be on soundclioud in like 5 mins

and the new one is in the link :P betetr now or not ?

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Originally posted by Etiienne and the new one is in the link :P betetr now or not ?

can't really make out the difference. tbh 5 mins is nothing :P it'll take hours. care to send me the mp3 file of urs and the BPM u use, ill try to put a stronger lead on top to show you what i mean when i get the chance.