Last edited by Rink on Nov-14-2012 at 03:31

cant tell if its because im listening to the SC and not the WAV file or if the mastering is a little weak but i feel it could be beefed up. As far as musically, solid melody. especially at 3:00 when that lead synth comes in

Which one Tatanic or #WIP?

titanic

Thanks for the reply, yeah I know what you mean. Going to look in back into it, and do some volume adjustment's. ;0)

Titanic is now sorted ;0)

Comments welcome ;0)

Hi Rink,

Gave these listen. Will give a few comments.

Titanic - This track seems to lack any real coherent structure, I struggled to get into it as there is no progression, things just seem to happen without any real plan.

WIP is the stronger of the two in all aspects.


Summary:
Both tracks really struggle in terms of balance of sound. You need to focus on getting different musical components to sit right in the mix. Read up on use of compression and how to mix your tracks so that you learn to bring out the right frequencies.

Start writing percussive elements. You tracks are very flat and have no drive because of this.

I look forward to see how your tracks develop in future as you some nice ideas but they are still a little on the raw side at the moment.

Thanks for sharing

Cheers
Nem

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Thx for your comments, all has been listened to, and have been taken on board. Still finding my feet, but getting stronger by the day ;0) Just had my track played on BBC Introducing, so not all bad ;0)