Hey welcome to the forums!

Just some random thoughts:

The bell sound is very bland. I think it could use some reverb/delay/eq'ing to accentuate the high-end to bring it out in the mix
If you're going for that big trance sound, you're going to need more elements in the mix and bigger sounds. I'll let you figure that out yourself
I think the bass-line should be louder relative to the kick. The low-end should be hitting substantially harder, and the same goes for all the other instruments.
Honestly the melody and harmony aren't very interesting. I would suggest writing one very catchy concept and running away with it, keeping it consistent (but not boring) rather than creating a lot of phrases that do not clearly work well together.

Hope this helps!

Great structure and clean mix. Love the build up at 240ish but it lost its energy in the drop. You got a lot of room to build rhythmic energy in the drum track. Keep devoloping your sounds !

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Thanks, i agree there is a lot i need to add. still trying to figure out how i can make it large & in charge. every song is a learning experience.
i definitely struggle with trying to stay simple, but interesting at the same time i find myself over thinking simple things.
thanks appreciate the input back to my DAW.