Like the idea, whip it into shape. I think you'll like this tom cloud fellow.

Nice warm feeling to it. I'd like to hear the extended version of this one.

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Originally posted by MSZ Like the idea, whip it into shape. I think you'll like this tom cloud fellow.

Like that guy lol - thanks Mac for this info, will check him out

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Originally posted by avalar Nice warm feeling to it. I'd like to hear the extended version of this one.

Thanks man, it's coming nicely together, still have to sort the vocal element out a bit and then we will be polishing the final version before release - always appreciate anybody new/different perspective - thank you,

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I am listening on my laptop so don't take this too seriously. But yeah, I like the overall idea, the progression and SOUND a lot. IMO you should add some variation to hats, just to keep it interesting and energetic, and add some booty-moving but classy percussion. Looking forward to hearing where this one will go

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Originally posted by Vernon Wanderer I am listening on my laptop so don't take this too seriously. But yeah, I like the overall idea, the progression and SOUND a lot. IMO you should add some variation to hats, just to keep it interesting and energetic, and add some booty-moving but classy percussion. Looking forward to hearing where this one will go

You got it man, it is just pure melody for vocal to find it's home lol and will definitely have some variations in drums and fx department
- I'm really glad you like this concept man.

Thank,

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Really satisfying main belly here but it would be enhanced by using a different more funky up to date lead and also that little pic sounds after a while could be better to as it's a bit obvious imo.

Great feel though, try to finish it!

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Originally posted by Richard Butler Really satisfying main belly here but it would be enhanced by using a different more funky up to date lead and also that little pic sounds after a while could be better to as it's a bit obvious imo. Great feel though, try to finish it!

Thanks Richard, still in process so far as I have two different direction for this track -> one is instrumental only and second one with vocal, we will see which one will sound better

And I will try to finish this one man, appreciate !!!

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Just post a new link to this updated and a bit more develop version of this track:

DariusX - "It is Coming" (WIP only - Looking for collab vocal for this track) by DariusX.

Still undecided about vocal or not so any suggestion are more then welcome

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Last edited by TranceLover007 on Feb-28-2013 at 23:58

I'm not a fan of vocal stuff, so IMO i will try to make it just instrumental. you ve got all the elements for that. But i can perfectly imagine a vocal on your track...

Anyway nice stuff, keep going !

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Been awhile since I've ventured into these forums...so hi... again. (I like giving feedback *shrug*)

Anyway...

What spurred some of the FX choice in and around 0:50? Some of them seem a little out of character for the track, some fit pretty well. (weird twangy sound was weird)

Liked the interplay around 2:00 between the synths. Song seems to lack a little energy here though. Extra hats as stated above could help with this.

Rev/Cymbal release at 2:28 could be slightly longer to provide less abruptness into the break. (the breakdown was quite abrupt)

To me the electro synth that comes in at 3:16 comes in a good bit louder than everything else. It even drowns out the kick that eventually comes in. If I set my volume to 5%, I can pretty much only hear that synth.

Also, is it intentional to have the build-in after the break sound totally different than the prior idea? It's just slightly jarring to completely transition from that nice dark prog. vibe, into the brighter more aggressive one, with the small amount of time spent on transition. Most songs I've heard that go for total idea/mood switch, take a little more time to transition over.

Liked the initial dark prog. bit, as it was moody and had a nice groove and some emotion. Didn't particularly like what came after the break as much, and it seemed alot weaker musically than what came before it. I do like the rich sound you get out of your songs, and that section around 2:00 compliments it.

Good idea so far, finished result will probably be pretty cool. No opinion on vocals, soz.

- Cheers