You should probably embend the song into here so people dont need to click on the link.

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Nice work!! I can definitely hear this being played at club pool parties and festivals. I also like how it was mixed and mastered. I can hear all the elements clearly and its got a good punch. Overall, well done

funny combination in the intro of those steel drum plucks and the party house pitch bends feels like the kick could use a bit more space in the mix, or else a different introduction that doesn't rob it of its impact. liking the harmonic content, but missing a little bass. you could probably move people more with a stronger bassline, something with character that could play on its own too. that would also allow you a pause in the currently rather constant barrage of high freq melodies. that dry bottle flute main pluck gets old and frankly a little annoying after a while, relief comes only at 3:12 not sure the guitar is working as intended. overall a bit too repetitive, make the track shorter maybe?

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piano stabs are a bit loud, i like the synth you use on the chorus along with the piano (feels like a flute more or less). This needs a driving bassline very much, consider it.

thanks for taking the time to listen and leave feedback. i like the suggestion of a driving bass. i will try and work on that