Pads/spacey-reverb sounded good. Overall nice sound its got going on.
I've always loved fast breaks mixed with trance.

You want constructive criticism since you're still working on it? Good I thougt so. :P

All the sounds in the track seemed a bit too "big", like taking up too much space. If they were all constricted a bit smaller and made more tighter/powerful in a sense I think it would have a lot more pro sound to it. But maybe thats just my taste. Thanks for sharing.