Nice track. Your voice and instruments work really well together. Once the beat comes in though I feel like something is missing. Could just be me but another bass type synth or something in the mid range would really flesh it out. Overall though im liking it, keep it up!

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Honestly a cool track. Very downtempo and not something I would consider trance though. Good job.

Awesome! Thanks for the responses guys. Lost Hawk now that you've mentioned it, it does feel a tad lackluster when it kicks in. I'll have a look at adding that mid range synth you mentioned.

PassionPunch out of interest what genre would you class this as? I'm pretty new to electronic music, haven't a clue haha

Well it's definitely trancey. The end bit with the sidechained pads sells that part. The first three quarters reminds me of a solo artist with some synths and a drum machine in a live act if you know what I mean. I mean if the beginning was the start of a breakdown, that would fit the song structure well. I'm not hear to argue genres, just has it's own vibes (which are good ones!).