Registered: Nov 2013
Location: Iceland, ólafsfjörður
Hi.
Your idea is good but it needs a lot more.
your track is way to repetitive. you should try to add some kinda melody on top of your chords
Your drums sound very lifeless an uninteresting because they are the same the whole track.
here is a great video on how to make your drums interesting https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DL5sDGleJ0Q
also i suggest you go and listen too some of your fav prog house songs and really analyse the like when the drums come in, when the pad starts, when the brakedown is (if there is in the song) and so on just to help you understand how most songs structured
- Soulable
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Aug-28-2014 16:26
Kondria
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Jun 2014
Location: Sydney, Australia
Thanks for the feedback!
I'll definitely keep all that in mind for future tracks
Sep-04-2014 03:10
passionPunch
tranceaddict
Registered: May 2014
Location: Ontario
Pretty solid overall. You really need to change things up though. You really could use some more fx to get more movement in your track. You practically have no builds anywhere. Your main riff works well, but you need to add something over top of it. IE a main melody that you work towards, and then take off with. It sounds simple but take a few of your favourite tracks and copy the structure, copy the techniques they use. Then get creative and make it your own.
