the synths remind me of a noemi remix or sumtin, very nice! i love it! uplifting, clenses ur spirits! u shuld get signed
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Oct-19-2002 22:03
davinox
diving deep into sound
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: you could say i'm from dallas
Well made. A little on the cheese side, but who cares.
Maybe i'd add a little variation, as it gets a little boring, maybe some breakbeat, or a second lead.
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Oct-20-2002 04:35
John
In Praise Of The Sun
Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Delft / Den Haag / Dordrecht,
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Originally posted by Seventh City
the synths remind me of a noemi remix or sumtin, very nice! i love it! uplifting, clenses ur spirits! u shuld get signed
woohoo! thnx 7c glad you like it!
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Well made. A little on the cheese side, but who cares.
my inspiration is ian van dahl j/k maybe youre right...but as you said who cares
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Maybe i'd add a little variation, as it gets a little boring, maybe some breakbeat, or a second lead.
ill see what i can do.. a breakbeat shouldnt be too though..its easier then a coming up with a second synthline
this is nice, but a lil bit cheese, thats rite, but who cares?
otherwise is a lil bit thinn, i would like to hear more energy in a track like this, but it very nice mate
Oct-21-2002 05:16
Icone
In Dreams...
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium
hey john,
it's a pretty nicely arranged track, but as someone else said, it might get a little boring... try creating a great melody like i'm trying now... hehe.
take care,
Wim
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no worries to in the clear, timeporte is here.. (to didn't make sense! )
as usual (i'm starting to be a groupy! ) i'll download and edit my reply later!
*edit i didn't like the beginning of the track.. too simple and i think you can do better, also the way you let the main melody come into the track, not too good if you ask me..
but i liked the qlimax and you added a good underlying layer which supports the main melody.. the sound is a bit commercial as previously said and i think you can do better..
all that i said is ofcourse good ment critizism.. maybe you do a remix and make it feel little bit lighter, more progressive it would do the track good if you ask me!
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