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Hello,
I enjoyed your track.
Some pointers, the bass and the bass drum are not well mixed together, they interfere with each other and create a very messy low end.
Then, the intro goes either for too long or needs a decent lead.
During the breakdown, I dont think the choir sounds really fit the track well, maybe try substituting them with a nice strings / supersaw...or something similar.
Or try to separate them a little bit more with EQs. Otherwise good job.
The breakdown is also a little too long for my taste, but again that might be a matter of personal preference.
One thing I learned over the years is, that while a track is perfectly nice and has some good flow and nice elements, it still needs a hook (something you could whistle along).
Keep the good work up! And please dont feel discouraged - I just ... well I mean it in a good way, youre doing fine!
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