any criticism would be cool thanks .

This is actually pretty good.

What I don't like is that the snare roll at 1:03 sounds a bit too loud, and the keys in the breakdown are too repetitive. Ever beat has the same key pattern/rhythm, which should be varied I think. Otherwise very good.

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Originally posted by AlphaStarred This is actually pretty good. What I don't like is that the snare roll at 1:03 sounds a bit too loud, and the keys in the breakdown are too repetitive. Ever beat has the same key pattern/rhythm, which should be varied I think. Otherwise very good.

thanks a lot !!

I love the lead both melody and sound.

The breakdown is very nice, you should work on the mastering a little bit, because sometimes the mix is a little too busy and sometimes little messy. Otherwise good job, congrats!

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Originally posted by BOOsTER I love the lead both melody and sound. The breakdown is very nice, you should work on the mastering a little bit, because sometimes the mix is a little too busy and sometimes little messy. Otherwise good job, congrats!

thank you ...i learned a lot making this track.

Agree, has some really good potential to be serious candidate for shopping around lol

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