Well, it's melodic ...

I'm sorry but nothing about this works together. That high pluck is really nice, but it doesn't sit well in the beat, nor with any of the other melodic elements. The beat is mixed oddly--the kick is super muffled and doesn't punch through to drive the track.

The structure is... aimless. There's no movement from one phrase to another, it's basically just the same loops stacked on top of each other. You need some ups and downs to generate a feeling of moving forward.

Ugh, I really hate saying stuff like this, so please take it constructively even if I've worded things poorly.

On a side note, there's an interesting visual effect with the colour you used as the track image. The pseudo-waveform looks like it's erasing itself as it plays, which is pretty neat!

I'd kind of like to fiddle with that high pluck though, seems like something very pretty to hang a track on. PM me if you're down.

Thanks for comment!

That high pluck melody seems like it's to delayed (not delayed as an "effect")... did notice in one moment, but then later it started to sound ok to me. Now it's back again. Yeah, it's sounds off . But still, i'm glad you liked the "pluck"! Oh, and the waveform too!

Last edited by gordan100 on Jan-15-2015 at 02:51

Better?

It's a bit better. You're going to get much more useful feedback here: http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...7&forumid=47&s=

Thank you, i'll try there