Melodic idea sounds sweet man but for me there is couple of issues:
one would be brightness of this WIP - at lease for now is a bit on the bright site and second one is your ping pong/delay on the synth pluck (specifically in the last few bars) created a bit of mess/chaos which translate to unwonted experience like lost interest in listening or even a fatigue -> but melody line and concept by itself is really cool.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Melodic idea sounds sweet man but for me there is couple of issues: one would be brightness of this WIP - at lease for now is a bit on the bright site and second one is your ping pong/delay on the synth pluck (specifically in the last few bars) created a bit of mess/chaos which translate to unwonted experience like lost interest in listening or even a fatigue -> but melody line and concept by itself is really cool. Darek

tks for the advice Darek.
the track isn`t finished or mastered.
tks for your feedback and i`m glad you like it