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Originally posted by alteredfuture

Overall I like this concept, it is very peaceful and memorable (at lease for me).

I think what you are missing is some form of spark over the top of what you already created, like some arp or maybe a lead playing some big but smooth melodic part! -> what I'm simply saying is that you need something which will keep listeners attention for this track entire length.

You are on the right path man and with some small tweaking in the structure of this production you can definitely have something worth of shopping around.

Cheers,

Darek

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