hey guys,

my first post and also the first time i've submitted a track anywhere.

I would love to hear comments, criticism and any advice you may wish to offer.

The last bit seems to be flat and lost after the build-up, cant seem to get it right, help please!

I have used solely reason 2 for this.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/sirkus.htm


Thanks
CJ

My comments:

-THe first bit is kinda boring
-the pause at the 2 minute area is reallllly cool!
-when there was a similar pause later on, it sounded kinda weird.
-its like kinda technoish to me

caleb

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