I'm trying to figure out the words for this awesome song, and i think i have them pretty close, but i'm not sure. Does this sound right to you guys?

There is a price to pay, for the mistakes you make,
To discover what you do, it will always come back to you,
I couldn't see it before, hiding behind closed doors
When you step outside yourself, it'll be the face of someone else

Breaking your fall from grace, in this empty space (not sure on this last part)
like a thorn in your side, it puts a dent in your pride
no one believes you now, it caught up with you somehow
and in the voodoo of your flame (i'm sure that part is wrong :P)
and it will never be the same

in the moment of madness, under your angry skies
you are not what you feel, this is insanity
from the shadows that darken the depths of your angel eyes
knowing nothing is real, this is insanity