This is a melodic intro. track that i really like. it is long but worth it!

Jacob Aman - Star Energy 2

it is a jpg right now.. save as all files and rename as .mp3..

Please tell me what you think of the ending especially, im thinking of changing it, but the rest im pretty set on.

*** Its all ready. This is my latest version. ***

Last edited by trancedfarmer on Nov-22-2002 at 19:22

As a intro I have to agree with you that it's very long, perhaps you should make a shorter version?

I think it's a bit hard to judge because as you said, it's an intro for something and maybe not really a song in a common sense.

You got a lot of really interesting sounds going there which is really cool, if you had kinda compressed the song lenght I think it would have been an excellent tune, but the way it is now I think it's too long. It's like watching an 9 hour french movie, yes it has got a plot but the action is over spread over way too long time

I definately get a kinda feeling of being in space by this tune, hehe.. especially in the end because it sounds so distant.

So, for the constructive critism, I'd say compress the length and put on a fat bassline. If you do that you got a very excellent tune

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I think i will take out the ending wherre the beat comes back in and that will make it more like 8-9 minutes. then ill probably add more to the buildup where its kinda prolonged.

thanx