sounds quite good! and for the second track ever, excellent! there\s a comfortable melody in the track, but imo the track can be a bit rearranged to sound even better (i'm specially referring to the bass and drums. more hats, deeper kick, and perhaps another type of bassline, more advanced one. i think it's to simple and shallow) but that's only what i think. in the end, it's your thoughts that matter. but, it for sure is a good track. love tha pads! sweeping beauty hope to hear more of you in the future
btw, made in reason?
and the speed was perfect
Nov-27-2002 19:59
Flotser
|Roots| Addict
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Tel-Aviv, Israel
I agree with [nils], your track sounds great, also like your melody alot, and also that Hard-trance like bass in around 0:30 and throgh the song. also you connected all the parts of the song very well, cant find anything to make better, maby only some new samples...
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Nov-28-2002 10:59
>everest<
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Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Nottingham, England
Thanks for your kind words ppl, ill deffinantly take what you've said into consideration. This track was made in fruity, using various extra Vst's and external generators. Im not completely happy with the final version as im having trouble mastering it. It gets a bit loud sometimes and distorts. Ah well, im sure ill suss it.
Again, thanks alot!
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there\s a comfortable melody in the track, but imo the track can be a bit rearranged to sound even better (i'm specially referring to the bass and drums. more hats, deeper kick, and perhaps another type of bassline, more advanced one. i think it's to simple and shallow) but that's only what i think. in the end, it's your thoughts that matter. 
hope to hear more of you in the future 
