HI there.....

It doesn't sounds so well... ...

first of all the sound of the song is amaturish....
second there sure some stuff to fix
0:25... look how everything doesn't blend together...
and the strings in the background kinda annoying...do somthing about them, i guess also stop changing the main beat so often through the song....

but if its only your second track, dont worry and keep practicing

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learn some music keys and stick to them. your track is out of key and evil on the ear!!! sorry

For some reason, I actualy like the out of key sound. The song has potential.

hehe...been listening to it....I kinda like the melody alot.

I'd like to remix it if you can send me the file as REASON or MIDI File. Depends on how u produced it.

Greets, Matthew

Hi Matthew,

thanks for listening to my song.

it was my 2nd attempt.. EVER hehe!

I can certainly email you the Reason 2 file.. it should only be small.... what is your email address?

My newest song is much better.... go to:

http://www.pendarand.com/starsurfer/songs/soniclove.mp3

the song is SONIC LOVE..

Anyways.. let me know your email. You can mail me at: [email protected]

I will send you the reason 2 file.. and let me know what you think of my new song!

Cheers

StarSurfer - Scottie

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