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The way:
Well first off, fix that damn synth in that start WAAAAY too much mid range...
I like the melody, but the track itself is sorta boring and sounds very simple and amateurish.
Try and work with your sounds and get every sound as clear as possible. Else its good and sorta deep, just boring and quickly produced sounding,
but good melody, just keep it up 
Cheers,
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