Overall - i like your track.... but maybe when I compare it to stuff other people post here, it has some non-pro sound it, also do you think the drum-roll at 5:06 , 5:12...etc. is needed?..

realy don't take my words to serius, i still didn't even post one track of mine here

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nice job man

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Hya man!
Nice job on this one!
I did liked it alot.
Its nice how u came up with your own uniqe style in youre works.
The style of this work remindes me of your last tune - The centre of the maze, altho I think this one is a way better.
You have managed to get a hold of the melody and expressing it in your own way. (Its nice that you chose this tune to remix, one of my all time favorites)
The onley thing that I disliked were thoes drumrolls at 5:06 - 5:30
it just doesnt sound to good IMO, i loved the way u used them in the buildup, but they just dont fit too well in the middle of the tune, to improve that you could try changeing the snare type, or making them quieter, or you can just try adding something else instead, but its just my opinion you dont have to take it too seriously.
Overall its a nice well put together tune, which combines many great elements that makes this one sound more intresting and less amateurish. (loved the sort of break beat thing at 3:30 )

heh, i guess i wrote enough now...

wating to hear more from u man!

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Thanks you guyz for the comments

Kreing, I understand all of the comments and I will defnitely consider them Ima take this thing into some serious rework, make the snare a bit punchier and the kick deeper, probably improve the synth and some Hihat work as well.

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As promised oDrori I've had a listen,
and it is a nice toon, but just not my cuppa.
'Centre Of The Maze' was more my style.
But hey, can't have all trax sounding the same eh?
Keep up the good work matey.

ps. Praps catch ya in the hub again.

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Haha thanks for the reply

I know this is less your style, though I'm more of the melodic-hard-strong kinda type

I do have a Hard Trance production in work though so hang on

CU around!

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Wow..u made me another fresh feeling..
u own your own remixing style now....
looking forward to hear ur remix of Airscape-l'esperanza
see u soon & keep up the good works... J.H.

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Originally posted by jonathanho Wow..u made me another fresh feeling.. u own your own remixing style now.... looking forward to hear ur remix of Airscape-l'esperanza see u soon & keep up the good works... J.H.

Hehe, thanks for the connfidence boost mate

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at first i kinda liked the groove it had goin, but for me the beepyness just got a bit much but hey thats prolly just my taste

the drums could definatly do with some work.. the kick u use hasnt really got the right sound for the song IMO. and as a few others said... those snare rolls have to go

other than the beepy one, the synth work aint half bad tho

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Originally posted by tu_face at first i kinda liked the groove it had goin, but for me the beepyness just got a bit much but hey thats prolly just my taste the drums could definatly do with some work.. the kick u use hasnt really got the right sound for the song IMO. and as a few others said... those snare rolls have to go other than the beepy one, the synth work aint half bad tho

Heya, thanks for the comments

Yeah I'll get the snare fixed at that part, the beepy synth will probably replaced with deepr one or a 'Ruder' , Dumonde styled one.

Working on getting the kick to proper sounding

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Plz don't kill me, but I didn't like it much. Just wasn't my type of sounds on it.