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Magnus
I'm getting old



Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Seattle, WA
[DD] Finished Work... Comments, Suggestions?

Hi everyone. Please take a second to download this track and let me know what you think. Please be as honest as possible. Cheese? Plain crap? Would you listen to it for more than a split second? What things do you like about it? Thanks everyone!!

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Download Finished Work

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Fatboy
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Registered: Jan 2001
Location: London, UK

I'll try to be as honest as possible. I think the melody was slightly cheesy. And very simple. It could also need some more percussion. I would also change that sound that jumps in at 4:46 and acts like the main melody some places in the tune. I liked the quality of it though. It is the choice of sounds I would reconsider. Perhaps you should listen some more to artist in the similar style to that you want to do and get some pinpoints of how to do it. Hope I could help

Peace


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Magnus
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Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Seattle, WA

Thanks for listening Fatboy and for your comments! They are greatly appreciated!

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oDrori
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Kibbutz Gaash, home of all the light in Holyland

Am DLing at the mo, BRB with comments!


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Flotser
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Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Tel-Aviv, Israel

Hello!!

I like that track!,
the melody is kinda cute , and it sounds well to me,
sorry dont know what to add to this though...

will be cool to see more of your work


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tu_face
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Registered: Oct 2000
Location: Sheffield, UK

tried to dl it, but got this message:

quote:

We are sorry, but the file you are trying to download is larger than the maximum length permitted under current network conditions. Please try again later when network conditions change. The file you were trying to download was 8846524 bytes.


grrrrrrrrrrrrrr


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oDrori
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Kibbutz Gaash, home of all the light in Holyland

Nic ework, I believe the peaks could use some more string power... Maybe a bit more complexness on the hihats


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Trickle
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Registered: Dec 2002
Location: St. Cloud, MN

It's pretty good so far. I like the melodys you use. But I guess I don't like the trasitions. But otherwise it's really good. I would like to hear more of your stuff.


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DJMikeyP
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Registered: Aug 2002
Location: California

Dude I'm trying to download your track and its taking damn forever.

Note to all artists: please provide lofi versions for idiots like me.


Mike

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DJMikeyP
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Registered: Aug 2002
Location: California

Dude I must say your mix is very clean and powerful. I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to hear your take on reverb, EQ, effects, mixing, etc because DAMN thats some very PRO sounding.... sounds.

Melody/etc - good also. I just think me personally would have used a harder synthy/echoey sound for the leads. But then again I don't even have anything like that and would have resorted to a saw tooth or triangle.

Mike

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Magnus
I'm getting old



Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Seattle, WA

Thanks for all the comments everyone and for taking time out of your day to listen.

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