Hey all,

I've upped this demo track up to my server, it's quite an uplifting piece, but I feel it sounds a bit cheesy, although it's emotional in some way...

Download here [right click, save as]
Song properties so far :
quality : 192 kbps
size : 13.3 MB
time : 9:44 mins
tempo : 138 bpm

What do you think of it? What should I edit to the track, or should I leave untouched? Or do you just feel it's plain ok as it sounds now...

Regards,
Wim

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hmmm...a lil bit cheese, thats rite, imo.
but its nice, overall, but cheesy, yes, but also emotional, you said it all. i say keep it this way, i do make some cheese sometimes to, but never let anyone hear it

hehe thx Endre

well, i'm willing to take the risk on merging on the boundaries of emotion and cheese... i think this one sounds more emotional than cheesy, but still. i'll see if i can add some more melodies to it or perhaps lower the notes a bit more, to render out the cheesy bits

cheers,
Wim

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Now now, don'tcha fret, cheese is your friend!


/Me DLing @ 4 KPS \

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Wim, I think this tune is REALLY good! Sure it's got a lil cheese, but not enough for me to care imo... but I'd be VERY interested in doing a remix of this if thats ok? Lemme know...

And again, great job, melody is very nice

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Originally posted by Boy trance Wim, I think this tune is REALLY good! Sure it's got a lil cheese, but not enough for me to care imo... but I'd be VERY interested in doing a remix of this if thats ok? Lemme know... And again, great job, melody is very nice

hey sure it's ok, i'll fix a midi of the track as soon as i can and give it to you. glad you like it

laterz!
Wim

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Wim, put more melody into it, more...hmm...how do i put this?
advanced melody, or something. i´ll sign up for a Deep Trancer remix!

melody is very nice, but the rest isn`t that good imo.. but its about the melody after all, in this sample, so its good

*waiting for an updated full version*

grtz,

mantis

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Originally posted by mantisnl melody is very nice, but the rest isn`t that good imo.. but its about the melody after all, in this sample, so its good *waiting for an updated full version* grtz, mantis

oh, what's wrong with the 'rest' luuk? you meant only the main lead is good in your opinion? or the drums etc? please explain a bit

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The melody is fine (although a bit lacking) but the bongo drum thingy in the intro is... uh... horrible.

Signing up for a hard(ish) trance remix

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melody is ok... nice tune... maybe change the bassline, its pretty simple...

i agree about the bongos at the beginning

overall is nice. thank you for sharing and putting your work into this.

so fuck if its cheesey, cheese is good (not in large doses though)