http://mp3.com/InExistent

please provide feedback!!!

thanx a million

and i am just a beginer!!!
hehe

so be kind!!!


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just released is red clouds
its wicked trance
please provide feedback

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Last edited by SDD1 on Dec-19-2002 at 22:07

no offense.... but you need a LOT of work on your beats....

first of all... you have like 2 kicks per beat when it should be 1...
it almost sounds like happy hardcore....

second of all... try to use more than just the bass kick for your drums... i think your beats need a lot of work...

on the brighter side... it seems to me that you have a good general idea of how to make synths... but they just don't sound good

Most important of all.. TRANCE IS NOT 500 BPM!!!!!! try something around the range of 135-150 BPM... ... and as for drums... try this basic beat...
X---X---X---X---
----C-------C---
--H---H---H---H-

where X is a bass kick
C is a clap
and H is a hi hat...

what your song sound right now.. is a bunch of random notes and kicks splattered across the whole song...

hopefully you can learn from this and try producing some more decent music...

good luck!

Yeah, you've gotta trim down the BPM. Otherwise I think that secret mix has a pretty cool melody. Just slow it down, ALOT. And keep working at it.

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Yo Yo Ma

thanx to you 2
i appreciarte your comments
and in no way will I be offended!!!

also did you check the original secret
that one is slowed down and at 135...

also needs a new bass line as it has
noone...

thanx again!!!


more feedback appreciated please!!!

n e more
feedback?

thanx

try and copy the drum patterns off of tracks that u like and stick to about 135 bpm. your tracks are far too fast

or i can just slow down the whole song...
but then you got secret ( original ) which
is the original slow version!

???

just releases is RED CLOUDS
i think its amazing...

please check it out

http://mp3.com/inExistent

now that is a huge improvement, my friend. try and get your synths to sound bigger and concentrate on you mix a bit more. its hard to believe its the same person as the other tunes, i must say

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My Next DJ Dates
March 12th 2005 - Becomeone @ (Sub) Logic, London (w/ Oliver Leighs, Simon Rutherford)
April 7th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ JFK and Liam Bamford)
April 9th Wildchild @ The Empire, Milton Keynes (late minute replacement for Brisky)
April 16th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Jonnie Pickering, Simon Patterson and Judge Jules)
May 5th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ Riley and Durrant, Liam Bamford)
October 15th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Simon Patterson, John O'Callahan, and Judge Jules)

thank you very much

new track
called moments
will be released i hope
soon

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